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Tuesday, May 7, 2019

English

Language Features
Tuesday May 6th

A Hyperbole Means: Over exaggeration
for example ( My mum gonna kill me! )
( I've been waiting for ages! )
Hyperbole can be used to exaggerated peoples feelings
it your making it sound more important

A  Alliteration Means: Like repeating letter sounds
for example ( How many snacks, could a snack stacker stack, if a snack stacker snacked stacked snacks )
Alliteration can effect the reader's into reading one pacific part of the book, poem and text.
It also creates a rhythmic kind of sentence



Creative Writing
Friday May 9th

Roaming through the graveyard it felt like something was watching me.
Every step taken was like my next nightmare, something just waiting to jump out of no where and scare m. as fear builds up inside me I  make a  horrendous  decision to run barefoot, scraping my feet against the tough jagged surface, not knowing where to run I take a rest beside a smooth rock. All of a sounder I hear a big moan beside the rock I was resting on, glancing in the distance I slowly turn my head towards the sound, tears full my face immediately, noticing a ghost figure charging towards me, as it came closer and closer. I start bolting straight a head, until coming upon a long depressing road, with no cars in sight, and the ghost figure still chasing me, I jump it to a bush, being as silent as possible. While hidden in the bush, keeping an close eye on the ghostly figure cruise by in complete disbelieve, as it couldn't see me. I soon rush out of my hiding spot, just to see that the road was changing when I blinked, First it would be all Rainbow & bubbly  then it would change dramatically into a  Lightless Horror. The weird thing was there were cars showing up, but with know one in the drivers set, and almost every car I'd watched drive past disappeared as if they never existed. After about 25 cars drove past I strolled ahead following both roads, cars we still driving past but still nobody in them, for a second I thought I was going crazy.
Still strolling along the side of the road I come upon this girl, I scream from the top of my lungs "HELLO" to the lonely girl with relief, she hadn't heard me the first time so I screamed again, she replied back "WE NEED TO RUN". I went close to her, she grabbed my hand and started pulling me along with her, I had asked her "Why are we running?" she didn't reply.....
 awhile later she had the courage to make a noise "sigh"  we didn't speak after that.
About 2 hours had past and we stilled hadn't talk , I was gonna Say Hi to the girl but my stomach had grumbled, so instead of saying hi I went on a hunt for food. 








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