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Tuesday, August 11, 2020

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Are students addicted to their cellphones? If so, is that a problem

Yes! Student’s are very addicted to their phones. In this paragraph I am trying to prove the negative and positive sides of mobile phones and the addictions the happen with this device. This addiction is a worldwide problem that occurs due to us spending most of the days on our phones, trying to present ourselves in a certain way to satisfy the needs of others & too get liked. While our mobile phones are a very productive and helpful device there is always a negative & positive side. Some negative effects of mobile phones are that they can be used in criminal activity and many other things. these devices can interfere and distract us from our school,work and sometimes even our relationships. But a positive is they help out so much in our every day lives and makes it easier for us to contact relatives and friends. 


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Key evidence/information you want to include.

  1. Time spent on phone

  2. Positive effects

  3. Negative effects


Delivery

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